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Post by injustus4all on Jul 28, 2008 20:06:27 GMT -5
Night came down around us, frozen stillness. Cats spend midnight eyes, window watching, hunting mornings light. Rest peaceful unease, lay dormant, light arrived. Blinding sunshine, clouds closed it's eye. Closing your eyes, enter mind. Pretend to sleep, mourning working hours, time we keep! Late for prosperity, day in, day out we repeat. Sounds different although same. Seen in eyes of passers by, one by one each arrives. Child screams, new born dreams, only wants something to eat. Weak. Restless. Tired mind, pulse pushing age through time. All we can do to get by is done. Keep some time have your fun. I remember sleeping, I woke through this nightmare, entered my dreamland escape. Started the world, began to create. Monster at large, blocking ways. Forming bridges, detour on highway. Travelers time spent, explain different way went. Services no longer need be present. Time will just pass you by, take no need for racing. Soon to be home, already know what I'll be facing. It's my belief, I'm growing into my mind. My kitty's having a tea party but I've ran out of time.
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Post by poeticweaver on Jul 28, 2008 21:29:38 GMT -5
A piece to ponder upon as the words you weave here are very captivating! Thanks for sharing, and all the best in all you do.
peace and love poeticweaver
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Post by injustus4all on Jul 29, 2008 18:08:43 GMT -5
I do my best and that is all I can do. Thank you for your kind words. Peace
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Post by annbkeller on Jul 30, 2008 4:42:05 GMT -5
I agree. There's much food for thought here. Your poem deserves a second reading to capture the full meaning of the words.
Very nice.
Ann B. Keller
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Post by anael on Aug 24, 2008 18:08:15 GMT -5
The title is so classic I had to read it. I was not dissappointed. Im liked it.
Dave
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