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Post by michaeljordan on Aug 8, 2008 22:48:37 GMT -5
How fragile is the thread That bears the weight Of Who I am Is it not true? My greatest strength is my deepest fear Will I ever be complete? How far must I run? On the treadmill of life Before I realize That I have lost the race In reality Losing the race Has gained me the victory For I now fully understand It matters not Who wins or loses All that truly matters Is who we help along the way
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Post by Deborah on Aug 9, 2008 16:24:36 GMT -5
Great message to get across to everyone here. It is true that many people focus too much on winning and losing and lose sight on the true meaning of it all. Thank you for posting.
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Post by shelleya on Aug 15, 2008 15:23:14 GMT -5
A lovely write and message. Heartfelt. Lovely depth of feeling. You express your thoughts beautifully in this piece. Good flow and tone. Excellent closing lines. Well penned.
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